Summary
During post production, I reflected with my team on our film & how we thought we did. I also helped my team gather screenshots for evidence in our slideshow.
Evidence of Further Input
Evaluation of Script
Artistic:
The story I wrote is a basic romantic comedy, but the use of moving locations, lighting choices, & a longer script to add depth to our characters makes it feel like a complete satisfying story, rather than a short video about a scenario.
Technical:
The script was made slightly different from our other ones. We left a lot of room for improvisation, especially when all 3 actors were on set.
How I Could Have Improved The Film
I could’ve added more scenes of Jerry feeling guilty for not going with Jared. I can show him visibly not wanting to be on the date with Jenna while it’s happening. I also could’ve had him leave early for dramatic effect. Just more scenes to show what happened with Jerry’s date.
What I Learned
I learned to take better care of equipment, & how to communicate with my team & improvise when some people are not present. I also learned how to make my dialogue sound more natural. While filming, some lines sounded weird so my team & I made on set changes.