How The Heart Decides screenwriter Film Production Journal

'FILM IS NOT DEAD, IT JUST SMELLS FUNNY'

‘FILM IS NOT DEAD, IT JUST SMELLS FUNNY’” by Khánh Hmoong is licensed under CC BY-NC 2.0.

Summary

During production, the script I made was more loose for the actors (like myself). We used most of the lines written, but ended up changing some lines & the way they were delivered in some scenes. I assisted the director & cinematographer on how things could be shot & if we could do additional shots.

Contribution to the shooting script

In the original script, Jerry goes with Jared immediately & then the film ends, but as this shot shows, we decided to have Jerry hesitate & end up staying with Jenna to add tension between Jerry & Jared.

This shot shows the ending we ended up going with & adding during production. Jerry & Jared make up & get matches on tinder like Jerry did in the beginning. This makes for a more satisfying ending.

Challenges faced during shooting

  • SD card was damaged making us have to reshoot most of our scenes.

On-site Re-writes during production

In the original, Jerry describes the girl & jokes a bit. In the final, Jerry’s jokes are gone & Jared just gives a suspicious nod.

Assistance given to the director

  • Actor positioning in scenes
  • How lines should be delivered

What I learned

During production I learned how to deliver certain lines from our director. I also learned to improvise & say different lines from the script to improve the film.

4/24/23 – 4/28/23 Weekly Work

Session Number 5
Week Number 6
Total Estimated Hours Contributed this Week: 4 hours
What was your overall goal for this week? Prep for our film & scout locations while making revisions.

Work Tasks 

Date Task Description Time Spent Was this a Best Practice? 
4/24/23Scouting locations, helping cinematographer with lighting, practicing lines. 50mins Yes, finding a public location we are aloud to film at is important, practicing lighting for indoor shots with cinematographer while practicing lines helps actors & camera man so that it’ll go smoother while officially filming.
4/25/23Communicating with team on potential shooting days & which weekend day & time works best.45mins Yes, with cinematographer gone, we couldn’t practice shots so we decided to plan other things.
 4/26/23 Going to library to do test shots & rehearse script lines. 30 mins Yes, while practicing lines & camera work we made adjustments that could make the dialogue flow smoother & the camera shots look better with different positioning.
 4/27/23 Creating production blog posts, scheduling shooting time that’s best for all of our actors. 45 mins Yes, Our actors have tight schedules so we communicated a best time for everyone.
 4/28/23 Watching scenes similar to our films tone & genre, the filling in on-set rewrites in production journal 45 mins Yes, We have our stuff scheduled so we can just do extra research for our film

Personal Comments (Optional) 

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4/17/23 – 4/21/23 Weekly Work

Session Number 5
Week Number 4
Total Estimated Hours Contributed this Week: 4
What was your overall goal for this week? Finish pre-production & start production.

Work Tasks 

Date Task Description Time Spent Was this a Best Practice? 
4/17Filming a mock of our film50 mins Yes
4/18 Revising pre-production: researching videos that show example of good pacing & putting it into the blog post.50 mins Yes
 4/19  Revising pre-production: Researching videos that show example of Moving locations & putting it into the blog post. 30 mins Yes
 4/20   Revising pre-production: Researching videos that show a good example of “Defining Character” film element then putting it into the blog post. I also collaborated with the director to confirm that the scene shows the film element. 50 mins Yes
 4/21   Revising pre-production: Finishing up blog post by researching “passage of time” film element in a scene. I then put it in the blog post. 50 mins Yes

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4/10 – 4/14 Weekly Work Log

Session Number 5
Week Number 
Total Estimated Hours Contributed this Week: ~5
What was your overall goal for this week? finish script & storyboard with director

Work Tasks 

Date Task Description Time Spent Was this a Best Practice? 
4/10Scriptwriting research~50 mins Yes
4/11Storyboarding & Scriptwriting, choosing location~50mins Yes
 4/12 Storyboarding & scriptwriting with Director ~35 mins Yes
 4/13 Storyboarding & scriptwriting with Director ~45 mins Yes
 4/14writing treatment & character decisions in blog post~45 mins Yes

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